Zack,
I looked over the revised manuscript and am very happy with the changes/additions you've made. The additional chapters, in particular Cybernetic Organism, really add a lot the the original text. I haven't left you any additional comments on the right side like I did before, because I feel like it is solid where it stands. I simply made some more grammatical/punctuation changes.
I'm not saying this is a totally complete piece, but it's at a point now where you can present it to potential distributors, and they'll take you seriously. I'd encourage you to take the next step. Come up with a query letter, an abstract of what your memoir is, what it stands for and why it's important/unique. Tell potential publishers why your piece is different from others and how it will impact readers.
I'd be more than happy to take a look at your query letter when you've got it done up, if you'd like. Good luck from this point forward! I've really enjoyed reading your manuscript.I've got a great deal of respect for you and am sure you can make this manuscript happen.
Fill me in as you progress!
Spencer
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